Hi people! So, for starters, please read the post below this one to understand what I'm talking about. Then return to this one.
My opinion on this piece is that it makes no sense! Literally!
Oh yeah, the creators are: Katrina, me, Willy, Pineapple, and J. And in that order too for most of the story. (It got messed up at the end I believe...) Credit goes to all of us!
Please excuse the horrible spelling and grammar. It's messed up I know.
Also, it mentions "Yo" and "Moose". I believe I mention these people before. Btw, they are males, not females. FYI.
Mistakes:
There are a lot, A LOT, of mistakes. For example, "Wlly" is spelled wrong. "The Nordics 6782nd" is apparently suppose to be a meeting, as Katrina has informed me. So they can't revive them?
In the ORIGINAL copy, "Emiko, Luka, Rin" had a comma but then Willy killed it and put a period. So that sentence makes no sense, what so ever.
There are many more mistakes but I'm too lazy to say them all so bye~!
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